"BRUTALITY HALL"
Cold doors are now locked.
"Twas a dark and brillig night?"
Thunder slaps me hard.
Wine, women and worms
Have I wasted thirty years?
Don't close that coffin.
My eyes want to cry.
So why do I keep trying?
My Host shakes his head.
In the billiards room
There's a tap on my shoulder
So I turn and growl
Dignity? Oh yes.
I think I remember You.
So where did you go?
Suddenly She's gone
My question hangs in the air
Salaciously sad.
I drown in my drink
In vibrant need of closure
Sadly unachieved.
So I stagger through
Thick carpeted rooms of bile
Please give me a crutch!
What do you mean "No"?
'Twas worth a try, I suppose
Will you set me free?
Elegantly cruel
She's turning the lights off now.
So I keep running.
It's Game, Set and Match
I whimper in the cellar.
Trousers in the bin.
Red dawn comes at last
So unlock the icy doors
Better luck next time?
Wow! This is amazing!!!! So well written my wonderful friend creature! You’re such a good writer x
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Aww, I know this would affect your unique-ness, but I do think they should clone you. π You’re very kind… I’m particularly touched because I was half-inclined to bin this post before thinking “what the hell?” π So a big thank you for the thumbs-up, Professor. π x
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You are way too critical!!!!
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Yep.
*slaps self on wrist*
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I really like how this was written. π
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My apologies… I think one or two comments went to “spam” so I’m in the process of sorting that out… I remain a bit of a technophobe. [!]
You’re very kind, thank you. π
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Oops. Probably ’cause I left a few comments? I have a habit of browsing through several posts and commenting when I drop by a blog. It’s ok.
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Ah, possibly… but it’s a good thing because it means I’ll check my spam folder every now & then.
I appreciate the comments! Thank you again. π
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Wine, women and worms… wine+women=time never wasted. worms? – my mum always saying, foreigners are bad with washing their hands lol
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Haha, sadly your mum is probably right. π¦ I’m criticised for reminding certain chums to wash their hands on a night out[!] I can’t tell you why ‘worms’ is in that line, though. π
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Yes, she’ve noticed foreign ppl almost never wash hands at home after “street” as we Russians do (if you been outside u have to wash hands when u get back home, that’s the rule lol). And never before they’ll eat lol
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Haha I have that rule at Chez Buffy. π
And yes… I’ll won’t mention the w-word again. π
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No more asking about “worms”…it scares me haha
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I’d re-blogged but I see u don’t have that widget. Sigh
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Maybe I need to change my settings? Thank you, though. π
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No, you go on you /wp-admin page & drug “reblog”-widget/or plugin in the area with ur Twitter/Facebook widgets. I think so
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Ah — I’m a bit of a tech-idiot, but I’ll see what I can do. π
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Go to your dashboard…you’ll find it there. Before (if too much of “tech-idiot”) – google “how to install reblog widget on WordPress” lol
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Haha. π
Well it ‘should’ be there if you click on the blogpost title?
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Dashboard is the name of your web + wp-admin. You should write it in the browser. For ex when I have to go to dashboard I’m writing there https://raynotbradbury.wordpress.com/wp-admin
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Oh I see it now lol π
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I don’t know π€·ββοΈ I’ve tried couple of times this morning- I couldn’t find it. Probably glitch
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Well, I’m glad you found it in the end… and on the plus side, you’ve introduced me to the Dashboard [!] Thankyou. π
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Haha…no I already been on your page in the morning, as I said. And I’ve clicked couple of times, but it wasn’t there – mystery πΆπ± now I saw it, so no problems π ps. Good to know tho what dashboard is π¬π¬
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Good to hear. π Haha well I’ve discovered my ‘spam list’ and un-spammed a few comments, so that was handy[!]
One day I will understand technology. maybe sometime in the 2020s. π
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Bhahahaha The Master of the Dashboard 2020 πππ (who knows if dashboard will exist thenπ€)
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Haha I’d better not procrastinate, then! π
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Reblogged this on raynotbradbury and commented:
Have he wasted thirty years? – he’s asking us, the world of WordPress.
Oh, depends on how many women…wine & worms π (not sure we all wanna know about the last one) ππ¬
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Bless you, Ray… ’twas very kind of you. π
Haha “wasted” is a somewhat subjective word, I think(!)
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Yep.. words are created to be used .. u used it well-we love your haikus.
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It’s particularly nice to be appreciated by a blogger of wisdom. Thank you again. *bows* π
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Wisdom? Hahahaha def not about me ππ
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Haha, we’ll agree to differ on that one, Miss Ray. π
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